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Post by huangshi715 on Feb 15, 2024 11:45:34 GMT
6. Online Trading Academy online-tradeing-academy Am I signing up or am I searching for a class? There is a disconnect between the headline and the form on the right. If I’m signing up for a class, why do I need to fill in my postal code? Am I signing up or searching for a class? Something feels off. A better approach would be to first sell me on the class and then. Which brings me to my next point… Why do I want a Thailand Email List free class? You haven’t even told me yet what the class is about or how I will benefit from it. The leading headline should be something like this: Learn the Art of Power Trading Find a free workshop near you and discover how to build a successful trading plan that fits your life Use testimonials that matter These testimonials fall flat on their face because they are not specific. Powerful testimonials are examples of exactly how someone else benefitted from the class, not vague claims that “anybody can benefit.” 7. Savo Group savo-group You build me up just to shoot me down Why yes, my reps have forgotten what they learned in training. Now what do I do? If you use a question as a headline, you need to answer that question with an action for the visitor to take if they say yes.
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